In school, we play, study, learn new things, have lots of fun, do projects, group works, make friends, get our bounding stronger, help one another and more. We have done our part to go to school and study rather than going to play everyday. We learn many things in school and we were serious in studies but sometimes we need to have fun and relax instead of being stressed up for school work. We should have equal time for playing as well as being serious and doing work. And thus i disagree that the school should become a site of discipline. School is like our home and the teachers and our friends care for us.
Firstly, we have many things to learn and have many homeworks and in addition to that, we also have tuition and tuition homeworks too so we should be handing in our work later. However, sometimes, students just slack and therefore hand their homework in late and give their excuse as they had many tuition homeworks.
Secondly, on field trips out of school, we should be able to roam around as most of the time of field trips is after school. As such, field trips are for us to relax and learn the outside world. Although if we roam around ourselves, we might get lost. Some students do not know how to take care of themselves, so if they did not watch out for vehicles when crossing roads, they would get hit by the vehicles.
Thirdly, we go to school to have fun
Lastly, i conclude that we go to school to have fun and therefore school should not become a site of discipline.
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Teacher teacher!!! pls comment!! i would like to know how i did for this (: Is 278 words leh.... i am so proud of myself :P haha joking joking (:
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ah, wei jia, your organisation is quite clear, only you need to write on both sides of the argument. Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, However, In addition, In conclusion...
ReplyDeleteIn addition, remember what I said about balancing the argument? You need to write on both sides of the topic in order to make your essay a better one.
Hope this helps. =)