This is a very well done piece of work by two of your classmates. Apart from some slight grammar errors, this is something like what I'll like to see from those who have not submitted yet.
Topic: the school should become a place of discipline. What are your views?
School is a place where we learn life long skills. School is also considered our second home. Some people think that school should be a place of discipline. I disagree.
To begin with, the school is a environment specially made for students to think out of the box. It also stretches their talents with the variety of CCA. If a school becomes a sight of discipline, students would be more worried about their ankle socks then their studies.
Secondly, the punishment for mischief in school is getting hasher. Teachers are canning students. They are inflicting physical injuries. This outrages parents. Does a learning environment consist of students caned behind close doors?
However on there other hand, the generations are getting more and more rebellious as time progresses. They are also open to more distractions such as computer games and peer pressure. It does not hurt to have a little discipline every once in a while.
In addition, some students will not learn if they are not disciplined. Imagine if the parents do not discipline their child, who would discipline them? If no one disciplines them, they would affect the reputation here. Parents overseas would not want their child to come to Singapore to study.
Therefore in conclusion, school can be and must consist of discipline. But it doesn’t mean that school should focus on discipline. The will-being of students is also important.
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