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School is a place where we study, work and play. It is the place where we nurture our creativity and minds to prepare us to go into the harsh world. Discipline is an essential need in our lives as we need it when we are going into adulthood. Without discipline the school will be in a chaos and at the same time, no respect will be given to the teachers and principals from the students. Hence, we agree that discipline is needed in the school.

To begin with, discipline places an important role in our lives as it reflects on how well our elders educate us. Comparing a school with discipline and one without discipline, majority of us will prefer to study in the school with discipline as we find that we can concentrate better. Concentrating in that school will not be a problem as there will be no disruptions or interruptions.

Secondly, nowadays especially the younger generation do not show respect to anyone at all. This is a very crucial matter as this bad example may be passed on to the next generation and the disrespectfulness will continue on and more hearts will be shattered.

There are also advantages of not having discipline in schools too. Pupils may not feel that they are being pushed off the edge as the stress given by their elders will decrease.

Secondly, they may feel more lighthearted without feeling so much pressure. This may allow them to concentrate better with a positive attitude.

In conclusion, our opinions of discipline are something that prepares us for venturing into the harsh and cold world when we are older so it is something that we cannot miss in our lives.

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